Elevator

[soncnica]

Title: Elevator
Author: soncnica
Rating: PG-13
Genre/pairing: Sam, Dean, GEN
Wordcount: cca. 600
Summary: He's stuck in an elevator and there's a spider on the ceiling.
Warnings: creepy?
Disclaimer: I seriously only own the grammar/spelling mistakes. Everything else is NOT MINE! ALL IS FICTION.

Enjoy.

He's stuck in an elevator and there's a spider on the ceiling.

"Great."

's a big spider too, eight long legs and huge black eyes and hairy back and everything.

"Hate spiders." he mutters to himself and flinches when the spider runs to the far corner, away from him thank you very much.

"Yeah, and you better stay there, you son of a bitch."

He lowers his head, shakes it and sighs: "Come on Sam, we had a plan. What happened to the freakin' plan?"

He'd sit down, but he puked on the blood red carpet a while ago and yeah... just no.

"Sam!"

So he stands, his back leaned on his shaky hands, palms of them resting on the cold wooden side of the elevator, cursing his brother's brains out and listening to a song playing over the speakers… over and over and over again, filling the elevator to its most hidden cracks.

One for sorrow, two for mirth
Three for a wedding, four for a birth
Five for silver, six for gold
Seven for a secret not to be told.

Eight for heaven,

Nine for hell,

And ten for the Devil's own sel'."

"Sam! Sammy! Sam!" he screams over the singing voice, but it doesn't help.

He's ready to start scratching off his ears again; they're already bleeding from when he tried that for the first time. And the second time. And he's pretty sure it's all a lost cause, because the tenth try will probably be as useless as all before were.

"Sammy! Sam!"

And the song keeps on playing, over and over and over and over and over and over and over again; it's fuckin' tearing his brain apart.

One for sorrow, two for mirth
Three for a wedding, four for a birth
Five for silver, six for gold
Seven for a secret not to be told.

Eight for heaven,

Nine for hell,

And ten for the Devil's own sel'."

He tried to find the speakers, but he found nothing, just spider webs in the corners; sticky, silky, sharp spider webs that caught his fingers in their trap.

"Sam! Sam!"

He screams again and knows that will do no good, because he's stuck in an elevator that has no doors, a light so bright it's burning his eyes extra crispy and his baby brother lying dead before his feet.

"Sam…"

He whispers and pukes all over Sam's open stomach, all over his baby brother's intestines while Alastair sings happily:

One for sorrow, two for mirth
Three for a wedding, four for a birth
Five for silver, six for gold
Seven for a secret not to be told.

Eight for heaven,

Nine for hell,

And ten for the Devil's own sel'."

… into his bleeding ears.

"Sam!"

Ten.

The End.

Comments

[etrix.livejournal.com]

OOOooo! Very creepy.

There's a lot of different fears being exploited there, all layered one on top of the other. *shivers*

[soncnica.livejournal.com]

hey :)

*squee* creepy.... YES *fist pump* I DID IT!!! I love creepy horror stories and YEY I WROTE ONE! :)))

thank you so much for reading and liking it! :)))

yeah there ARE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MANY things in this story, it would take ages to name them all. :)

so happy it made you shiver! :)))

sorry, maybe i'm way too happy about this, but ... creepy *beams* :)

thank you! :)

S.

[borgmama1of5.livejournal.com]

Ack! It was creepy to begin with and then you twisted it into something too horrible to contemplate!

[soncnica.livejournal.com]

hey :)

hahahaha, 'm gonna take that as a compliment, because I LOVE creepy fics and to actually write one and have people say it's a creepy fic ... *beams*

and yeah this story deals with a lot of issues... poor Dean *hugs him*

thank you so much for reading :)

S.

[justlikeswimmn.livejournal.com]

OMG! Spider and stuck in an elevator AND creepy music - get poor Dean out of that elevator! I'm hyperventilating for him! If you don't write something right now and get him off of that elevator I'm, I'm...

I'm going to go back and read this fic again, that's what I'm going to do!
Thanks!

[justlikeswimmn.livejournal.com]

I just have mention how much I admire my (creepy) icon against your black background - it's so much creepier than usual! cool! So I'm replying to myself, which is pretty weird too, actually. Thanks for the experience, though!

[soncnica.livejournal.com]

*squee* SPIDERS are nice... and btw, fucking love your icon.. now that is creepy!! *shudders* and you replying to your own reply is kinda awesome.... *hugs you*
man, your icon... *haveta stop staring at it*

and yeah elevators freak me out... *ugh* I mean what if the stop and something crawls in and eats you!? or it stops and you have to go to the bathroom like REALLY REALLY bad and OMG... uhhh... I just hate elevators...

and yeah poor Dean *shakes head* that poor baby! *sniffles*

thank you soooo much for reading this and leaving two very awesome comments! :)))))) thank you! *hugs*

S.

[sylsdarkplace]

Really creepy and well done. Reminds me of an old Twilight Zone kind of scene the way the horror is slowly revealed. The only thing that threw me was the nursery rhyme -- not your fault I kept hearing a Counting Crows song. Sometimes I hate my brain.
Again, well done. Thanks.

[soncnica.livejournal.com]

hey my dear!

I actually wrote this while reading your kennel story (don't even ask LOL)

omg I love Twilight Zone... fuck, but that was some scary stuff there... and for this to remind you of that, idk I feel really... *squeeee&beams* thank you! :))))))

ahhahahhaha, 's okay if you heard the Counting Crows song.... at least you heard something! :) *hugs*

thank you so much for reading!!! :))))

S.

[caluk.livejournal.com]

Yup. Definate creepiness. Chilling, gut-wrenching, packed with angst in between the shivers - just the thing to put in the right mood for the work party!

[soncnica.livejournal.com]

whoooot! me adores creepiness :)

thank you!

LMAO you need to be creeped out and angsty to go to a work party!? awwww *hugs you* I hope the party went well.... :))))

thank you so much for reading and for being creeped out :))))) *beams*

S.

[somer.livejournal.com]

Yes, the spider is definitely the creepiest detail in this fic...absolutely. Oh, and the elevator music because they're always creepy.

And I just had to google the rhyme and it makes it all the more creepier (jesus, have I mentioned that this fic was creepy?).

No, seriously, the sudden turn of events with Alastair took me by surprise and I love surprises :)

[soncnica.livejournal.com]

hey babe! :)

and if I tell you that the spider (in my head) is Alastair singing the song, does that make the spider even more creepy!? :)

and elevator music is the creepiest music I have ever heard in my life.. 's why I never take an elevator... I rather use the stairs ...

you had to google it!? awesome.. made you do some research... love that... awesome, awesome! :))) and doesn't that just make it even more horrible!? argh.

well you read like every story I ever done *huggles you* and you know I love to surprise people! :)))) so yeah..... *grins*

thank you so much babe! :)))

hugs you!!!

S.

[somer.livejournal.com]

Ah, yes, I had to google it. I didn't know this rhyme and I don't know if here in Germany there is something similar? Not that I know...

But don't worry, I love me some research. And I always want to know if something like this has a special meaning if an author puts it in her/his story. :)

And yeeesssss...every story. So keep delivering :P

[soncnica.livejournal.com]

hmmmm I think this is an English world kinda rhyme.. we don't have it here in Slovenia either... I was just browsing through creepy songs and rhymes and found this one and had it for like a year before the idea to use it here in this fic came to me :) man....

hmmm love doing research!? I'll remember that... *grins*

I shall keep delivering, 'm busy atm with the erm *whispers* rape story AND with The Hunt :) so yeah :)))

thank you, babe!

hugs
S.

[familybizness.livejournal.com]

Oh my. You creeped me out like WHOA. This is darker than my usual taste, but you're winning me.

[soncnica.livejournal.com]

*grins* well come over to the dark side... it's really awesome here... :)))))) *offers you some cookies* no worry, that's chocolate :)

thank you so much for reading and leaving a comment :)

S.

[saphirablue]

Oh boy, Dean! *hugs him*

That's really creepy and poor Dean!

Thank you!

[soncnica.livejournal.com]

hey :)

thank you so much for reading! :)

yeah poor Dean... but he's okay now... kinda :)

and *squee* creepy! *hugs* thank you!!!!

S.

[rince1wind.livejournal.com]

Yes, I think "creepy" is a good tag for this. Very creepy indeed. Poor Dean!

[soncnica.livejournal.com]

*grins* I like writing creepy stories sometimes :-):-) thank you for reading :-)

S.