Title: But The Storm Is A-Coming 'Cross The Hills Tonight 4/7
Author: soncnica
Rating: R, G, idk
Genre/Pairing: Jared/Jensen
Wordcount: cca 1.900 this chapter
Summary: Jared is King Dean Morgan’s knight. He is the one the King calls for whenever torture or punishment has to be done and Jared’s expertise is whipping. Jensen is his next victim. Or is he?
Warnings: Gore, blood, whipping and all that goes along with that, mystery, magic, abuse of history and knighthood, angst?, NO character death, NO disfigurement, hurt!Jensen, h/c.
Disclaimer: I seriously only own the grammar/spelling mistakes. Everything else is NOT MINE! ALL IS FICTION. The title comes from a song called A bar in Amsterdam from the band KatzenJammer and does not belong to me.
A/N: I just wanted to write Jared whipping Jensen, is that so bad? Don’t answer that. And well, this is what I came up with. If you decide to read this story, just trust me, I know exactly where I’m going with this. Thank you! And yeah the story is finished and it has around 7 chapters, I'll try to post every few days.
Beta: The ever awesome
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CHAPTER 4
The handle of the whip was light in his hand, he thought it would be heavy; it was an object with which he’d cause pain, cause blood to boil out of the skin, it was an object that would push things in motion… but it didn’t feel heavy. It felt familiar like no other thing did, it was soothing as nothing else was, his hands were made for this, formed to cradle the whip like air cradles a bird.
His hands weren’t made for his sword, he found that out some time ago; his sword always felt too heavy and too long, but he was still good with it. Better than anyone he’d ever met. But this whip… this whip was his, unique, special, one that he himself brought to the castle.
One that King Dean Morgan knew nothing about, one that only Louis knew of but the man would never tell.
The sun was hot, the heat melting his skin and turning his hair into a wet mess… there was no wind, there was nothing that would chase away the smell of dead animals and rotten fruits and the rancid breaths of people who were waiting for him to start.
He gripped the whip tighter, checked its lash, checked that it was as smooth as it could be, checked his sword and its position, checked his mind… and breathed out.
The crowd was all murmurs and soft words now, and Jared knew that it was because it didn’t want to miss one crack the lash would make in the air, just before it would hit Jensen’s back.
Sick people, they were. Sick in their heads, sick in their minds, sick all over. Sick to go pray in Churches so corrupted, it made his teeth rot just thinking about it. Sick to find joy in watching other people beg for mercy and bleed until their death.
Sick.
But so was he, because help him God, he did enjoy this. Whip in his hand and a bare back to paint. Those cracks that could be heard in the air just before the lash hit skin… he loved it. He had been trained for it. Trained to be the best at this, but that didn’t mean that he didn’t flinch when a man screamed and a piece of flesh fell off his back.
But he couldn’t show what he felt to anyone. That’s what nights were for. Shaking and sweating in his bed, the sounds of crackcrackcrack in his head sometimes so loud he screamed just to shut them up.
He shook his head. No more of that from now on. From now on, he had other things to do. A better life to go to, a life that was meant for him from the start. A life where all of this… would be forgiven.
He looked at Jensen first, how his back rose up and down like he had just run a hundred miles, shaky shoulders and hands gripping the rope tight.
Hold on Jensen, just hold on.
Then he looked at his King who waved his hand and nodded once, giving a clear sign to start.
You’re going down King, you son of a bitch.
He nodded, looked back at the sun illuminated skin, drew back his hand and made the whip fly through the hot air with such speed that the lash was invisible in the sunlight.
Crack.
Jensen screamed even with the shirt tucked into his mouth, and Jared was sure that it was more from shock than pain. He hoped it was like that, because if it was pain, then Jensen would pass out sooner than would be… commendable.
He knew that the first lick of the whip on tensed skin doesn’t really hurt… it feels more like touching snow for too long… an icy pain that spreads all over you and leaves you breathless until the next lick of the whip.
Crack.
Crack.
Crack.
Four quick strokes in and Jensen’s back was already red, but there was no blood yet. It just looked like a cat, big cat, had scratched him and left claw marks on his back.
Crack.
Crack.
Crack.
Three more and blood started to bubble up to the surface, spilling out from the welts, running slowly down to the waistband of Jensen’s brown pants.
Crack.
Crack.
Blood started to drip onto the ground from places where the wounds were deeper; big drops of red liquid, a small stream running from a deep wound on his left shoulder blade.
Blood hit the ground. Spilling onto the sand. Jared was sure he felt the land tremble and shake; everything aligning into its place.
He released a breath he never knew he held… it was peace that enveloped him.
He could do this. He could finish this. He would finish this. For the sake of ‘em all.
Crack.
Ten strokes and Jensen’s back wasn’t pale anymore anywhere, his shoulders shaking, arms trembling, hands gripping the rope above his head that hung unmoving between his shoulders, but not a sound escaped his throat. Not even a whimper.
Good man, Jared through and cracked the whip twenty more times in quick succession, wanting to get over with this as soon as possible, because there was no way – this needing to be done or not - that he’d be able to stare at that perfect, freckled skin being torn to shreds for much longer.
Things were starting to fall into place… and he needed to finish this.
Now.
Crack.
And Jensen screamed when a piece of flesh got torn away and flew right off his back when Jared raised his whip back to get momentum for another stroke.
The symbols carved into the whip’s handle were burning at Jared’s palm, telling him itsalrightitsalrightitsalright you can do this, you can do this, you have to do this, you have to do this the runes pure magic flowing into his palm, up his arm and into his mind, reminding him that this wasn’t just anyone, that this was Jensen.
That this was his best friend.
That this was the hero that the old songs sung about, the songs written by poets who walked this land long before King Dean Morgan was a thought in his parent’s head.
That this was Jensen Ackles, the hero who would save them all. The hero whose blood needed to be spilled on the land by a man born of magic.
Crack.
And Jensen’s body sagged down, chest colliding with the stone fast and hard, a small grunt spilling from his lips. His body slid down the pillar like all strings had been cut. Knees giving in, shoulders stretching, back bleeding, torn to pieces.
Jensen… no…
He swallowed down the anger he felt at Jensen, because of the man giving up this soon. It was too soon, he thought that Jensen knew better, hid better in his head.
He sighed and put the whip slowly back on a wooden desk that had been placed at his right side. It was full of bird crap and in any other circumstances he’d tell Louis to get his job done better next time… but there would be no next time. Not anymore.
He took long steps towards Jensen, picking up a bucket of cold water along the way. He had poured water in the bucket himself and he knew that the water was clean and cool, that nothing in it would hurt Jensen in any way. He knew that no one tampered with it, that everyone avoided things that were his, because they didn’t want his anger be directed towards them.
They avoided him like plague.
He stopped before Jensen, his feet sinking into the sand surrounding the pillar and he could feel it hot and moving beneath his shoes. The land was woken up by the purity of Jensen’s blood. The land was becoming alive. Finally the dark ages would come to an end.
Finally.
Jensen’s back was a horrible display of blood and flesh, some places a small flash of bone could be seen and they still had thirty-eight strokes to go.
He breathed and ignored the sight. There was nothing he could do about it right then, absolutely nothing.
He raised the bucket high up…
‘m sorry…
… and poured the water over his friend’s head in a fast move, crashing onto Jensen’s sweaty hair like a waterfall, cascading down his front. He tried to avoid hitting Jensen’s back and he mostly succeeded, but there was still some of the water that hit the open skin, making Jensen wail.
Jared wanted to cut his ears off, because the sound was pure pain.
‘m sorry, ‘m so sorry…
But he couldn’t stop now, he couldn’t make the King suspicious, he couldn’t risk this falling apart just because of how he felt.
How he wished he could be in Jensen’s place. How he wished the magic in him would be stronger. How he wished the magic in the whip would make the whip stop touching Jensen’s skin… he wished for many things.
So he yelled: “Wake up!” because that was the only thing he could do.
Jensen groaned and blinked his eyes open when Jared gripped him by his hair and raised him up back into position, whispering: “Easy, easy, you’re doing great, just breathe.”
“Get on your feet!” he tugged at the hair, making Jensen stand up again, “Up!”
The crowd loved it, loved how he showed who the man with the power was, showed them how to take a person apart completely so that he wouldn’t be able to get back together again.
He let go of the man’s drenched hair: “Keep your head up!!” and walked back to his whip, the symbols on the handle glowing dark blue for his eyes only and he thought I know, I know.
Crack.
The symbols soothed him with it is going to be alright.
Jensen’s back wasn’t a back anymore, not really the way a human’s back was supposed to look like. It was flayed, red, fire red; heat was coming off of it in waves, like it sometimes did off of the land when the sun was angry to the extreme.
The pants that hung low on his hips were soaked with piss and blood that was already starting to harden in the heat of the afternoon sun. The sand around the pillar was splattered with tiny and big drops of blood and some flesh that had fallen down… and that was gonna be left there for the birds and the mice and the dogs to devour.
There was still a piece of flesh hanging on a loose thread from Jensen’s back and when Jared cracked the whip once more, that, too fell down to the ground.
The crowd went insane, people jumping up and down to see better, mothers trying to hide the eyes of their children, but the kids kept on pushing away those persistent hands let me see, mommy, let me see, could be heard from Jared’s left.
But his eyes were on his friend; nothing else existed but Jensen. His friend who screamed and screamed and screamed until he started choking and puked all over himself again, nothing but air and spit running from his mouth, and gagging noises that almost made Jared spin around and crack the whip in King Dean Morgan’s direction.
Crack.
Last one.
The very last one.
Sixty strokes.
And then a flaming arrow hit the top wooden part of the pillar, hitting the dragon right in its chest and the crowd started screaming a different tune.
CHAPTER 3 _II_ CHAPTER 5
Author: soncnica
Rating: R, G, idk
Genre/Pairing: Jared/Jensen
Wordcount: cca 1.900 this chapter
Summary: Jared is King Dean Morgan’s knight. He is the one the King calls for whenever torture or punishment has to be done and Jared’s expertise is whipping. Jensen is his next victim. Or is he?
Warnings: Gore, blood, whipping and all that goes along with that, mystery, magic, abuse of history and knighthood, angst?, NO character death, NO disfigurement, hurt!Jensen, h/c.
Disclaimer: I seriously only own the grammar/spelling mistakes. Everything else is NOT MINE! ALL IS FICTION. The title comes from a song called A bar in Amsterdam from the band KatzenJammer and does not belong to me.
A/N: I just wanted to write Jared whipping Jensen, is that so bad? Don’t answer that. And well, this is what I came up with. If you decide to read this story, just trust me, I know exactly where I’m going with this. Thank you! And yeah the story is finished and it has around 7 chapters, I'll try to post every few days.
Beta: The ever awesome
CHAPTER 4
The handle of the whip was light in his hand, he thought it would be heavy; it was an object with which he’d cause pain, cause blood to boil out of the skin, it was an object that would push things in motion… but it didn’t feel heavy. It felt familiar like no other thing did, it was soothing as nothing else was, his hands were made for this, formed to cradle the whip like air cradles a bird.
His hands weren’t made for his sword, he found that out some time ago; his sword always felt too heavy and too long, but he was still good with it. Better than anyone he’d ever met. But this whip… this whip was his, unique, special, one that he himself brought to the castle.
One that King Dean Morgan knew nothing about, one that only Louis knew of but the man would never tell.
The sun was hot, the heat melting his skin and turning his hair into a wet mess… there was no wind, there was nothing that would chase away the smell of dead animals and rotten fruits and the rancid breaths of people who were waiting for him to start.
He gripped the whip tighter, checked its lash, checked that it was as smooth as it could be, checked his sword and its position, checked his mind… and breathed out.
The crowd was all murmurs and soft words now, and Jared knew that it was because it didn’t want to miss one crack the lash would make in the air, just before it would hit Jensen’s back.
Sick people, they were. Sick in their heads, sick in their minds, sick all over. Sick to go pray in Churches so corrupted, it made his teeth rot just thinking about it. Sick to find joy in watching other people beg for mercy and bleed until their death.
Sick.
But so was he, because help him God, he did enjoy this. Whip in his hand and a bare back to paint. Those cracks that could be heard in the air just before the lash hit skin… he loved it. He had been trained for it. Trained to be the best at this, but that didn’t mean that he didn’t flinch when a man screamed and a piece of flesh fell off his back.
But he couldn’t show what he felt to anyone. That’s what nights were for. Shaking and sweating in his bed, the sounds of crackcrackcrack in his head sometimes so loud he screamed just to shut them up.
He shook his head. No more of that from now on. From now on, he had other things to do. A better life to go to, a life that was meant for him from the start. A life where all of this… would be forgiven.
He looked at Jensen first, how his back rose up and down like he had just run a hundred miles, shaky shoulders and hands gripping the rope tight.
Hold on Jensen, just hold on.
Then he looked at his King who waved his hand and nodded once, giving a clear sign to start.
You’re going down King, you son of a bitch.
He nodded, looked back at the sun illuminated skin, drew back his hand and made the whip fly through the hot air with such speed that the lash was invisible in the sunlight.
Crack.
Jensen screamed even with the shirt tucked into his mouth, and Jared was sure that it was more from shock than pain. He hoped it was like that, because if it was pain, then Jensen would pass out sooner than would be… commendable.
He knew that the first lick of the whip on tensed skin doesn’t really hurt… it feels more like touching snow for too long… an icy pain that spreads all over you and leaves you breathless until the next lick of the whip.
Crack.
Crack.
Crack.
Four quick strokes in and Jensen’s back was already red, but there was no blood yet. It just looked like a cat, big cat, had scratched him and left claw marks on his back.
Crack.
Crack.
Crack.
Three more and blood started to bubble up to the surface, spilling out from the welts, running slowly down to the waistband of Jensen’s brown pants.
Crack.
Crack.
Blood started to drip onto the ground from places where the wounds were deeper; big drops of red liquid, a small stream running from a deep wound on his left shoulder blade.
Blood hit the ground. Spilling onto the sand. Jared was sure he felt the land tremble and shake; everything aligning into its place.
He released a breath he never knew he held… it was peace that enveloped him.
He could do this. He could finish this. He would finish this. For the sake of ‘em all.
Crack.
Ten strokes and Jensen’s back wasn’t pale anymore anywhere, his shoulders shaking, arms trembling, hands gripping the rope above his head that hung unmoving between his shoulders, but not a sound escaped his throat. Not even a whimper.
Good man, Jared through and cracked the whip twenty more times in quick succession, wanting to get over with this as soon as possible, because there was no way – this needing to be done or not - that he’d be able to stare at that perfect, freckled skin being torn to shreds for much longer.
Things were starting to fall into place… and he needed to finish this.
Now.
Crack.
And Jensen screamed when a piece of flesh got torn away and flew right off his back when Jared raised his whip back to get momentum for another stroke.
The symbols carved into the whip’s handle were burning at Jared’s palm, telling him itsalrightitsalrightitsalright you can do this, you can do this, you have to do this, you have to do this the runes pure magic flowing into his palm, up his arm and into his mind, reminding him that this wasn’t just anyone, that this was Jensen.
That this was his best friend.
That this was the hero that the old songs sung about, the songs written by poets who walked this land long before King Dean Morgan was a thought in his parent’s head.
That this was Jensen Ackles, the hero who would save them all. The hero whose blood needed to be spilled on the land by a man born of magic.

Crack.
And Jensen’s body sagged down, chest colliding with the stone fast and hard, a small grunt spilling from his lips. His body slid down the pillar like all strings had been cut. Knees giving in, shoulders stretching, back bleeding, torn to pieces.
Jensen… no…
He swallowed down the anger he felt at Jensen, because of the man giving up this soon. It was too soon, he thought that Jensen knew better, hid better in his head.
He sighed and put the whip slowly back on a wooden desk that had been placed at his right side. It was full of bird crap and in any other circumstances he’d tell Louis to get his job done better next time… but there would be no next time. Not anymore.
He took long steps towards Jensen, picking up a bucket of cold water along the way. He had poured water in the bucket himself and he knew that the water was clean and cool, that nothing in it would hurt Jensen in any way. He knew that no one tampered with it, that everyone avoided things that were his, because they didn’t want his anger be directed towards them.
They avoided him like plague.

He stopped before Jensen, his feet sinking into the sand surrounding the pillar and he could feel it hot and moving beneath his shoes. The land was woken up by the purity of Jensen’s blood. The land was becoming alive. Finally the dark ages would come to an end.
Finally.

Jensen’s back was a horrible display of blood and flesh, some places a small flash of bone could be seen and they still had thirty-eight strokes to go.
He breathed and ignored the sight. There was nothing he could do about it right then, absolutely nothing.

He raised the bucket high up…
‘m sorry…
… and poured the water over his friend’s head in a fast move, crashing onto Jensen’s sweaty hair like a waterfall, cascading down his front. He tried to avoid hitting Jensen’s back and he mostly succeeded, but there was still some of the water that hit the open skin, making Jensen wail.
Jared wanted to cut his ears off, because the sound was pure pain.
‘m sorry, ‘m so sorry…
But he couldn’t stop now, he couldn’t make the King suspicious, he couldn’t risk this falling apart just because of how he felt.
How he wished he could be in Jensen’s place. How he wished the magic in him would be stronger. How he wished the magic in the whip would make the whip stop touching Jensen’s skin… he wished for many things.
So he yelled: “Wake up!” because that was the only thing he could do.
Jensen groaned and blinked his eyes open when Jared gripped him by his hair and raised him up back into position, whispering: “Easy, easy, you’re doing great, just breathe.”
“Get on your feet!” he tugged at the hair, making Jensen stand up again, “Up!”
The crowd loved it, loved how he showed who the man with the power was, showed them how to take a person apart completely so that he wouldn’t be able to get back together again.
He let go of the man’s drenched hair: “Keep your head up!!” and walked back to his whip, the symbols on the handle glowing dark blue for his eyes only and he thought I know, I know.
Crack.
The symbols soothed him with it is going to be alright.

Jensen’s back wasn’t a back anymore, not really the way a human’s back was supposed to look like. It was flayed, red, fire red; heat was coming off of it in waves, like it sometimes did off of the land when the sun was angry to the extreme.
The pants that hung low on his hips were soaked with piss and blood that was already starting to harden in the heat of the afternoon sun. The sand around the pillar was splattered with tiny and big drops of blood and some flesh that had fallen down… and that was gonna be left there for the birds and the mice and the dogs to devour.
There was still a piece of flesh hanging on a loose thread from Jensen’s back and when Jared cracked the whip once more, that, too fell down to the ground.
The crowd went insane, people jumping up and down to see better, mothers trying to hide the eyes of their children, but the kids kept on pushing away those persistent hands let me see, mommy, let me see, could be heard from Jared’s left.
But his eyes were on his friend; nothing else existed but Jensen. His friend who screamed and screamed and screamed until he started choking and puked all over himself again, nothing but air and spit running from his mouth, and gagging noises that almost made Jared spin around and crack the whip in King Dean Morgan’s direction.
Crack.
Last one.
The very last one.
Sixty strokes.
And then a flaming arrow hit the top wooden part of the pillar, hitting the dragon right in its chest and the crowd started screaming a different tune.
CHAPTER 3 _II_ CHAPTER 5
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Date: 2011-11-06 11:34 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-11-06 11:37 am (UTC)S.
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Date: 2011-11-06 01:48 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-11-06 01:53 pm (UTC)oh there is a happy ending... yes... because well I'm a happy ending junkie too :))))))
thank you!
S.
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Date: 2011-11-06 12:13 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-11-06 12:56 pm (UTC)so I can SQUEE!? :))) awesome, thank you!!!! with comments like OMG I never know, because that can be bad or good, so.... thank you for the good, good comment too :))))
S.
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Date: 2011-11-06 01:50 pm (UTC)Can't wait for more.
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Date: 2011-11-06 01:54 pm (UTC)thank you so much! there will be more on Wednesday, and I hope the chapter will bring more answers :))))
thank you so much for reading!!! :)))
S.
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Date: 2011-11-06 02:44 pm (UTC)They should have tried sex magic, BDSM if they need the powerplay in the casting, but seriously, blood magic?
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Date: 2011-11-06 02:57 pm (UTC)it's just simple blood magic, because the Earth had to be awaken with Jensen's blood and Jared had to do that..... that's all there is.. it's just.. fullfiling a prophecy.... :)))) and this wasn't torture exactly... it was just something that had to be done and the boys both knew it.... erm more will be explained in the next chapter :)
meh sex magic is so overrated, so.. common... LOL :) I hate common things, because you don't need a lot of imaginiation for those, ya know!? :))
thank you for reading!
S.
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Date: 2011-11-06 03:11 pm (UTC)OMG WHERE DID THE FLAMING ARROW COME FROM?
WHATS HAPPENING????????????????
Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Date: 2011-11-06 03:16 pm (UTC)I wouldn't last one either... I mean talk about OWIE! uhh.... but yeah Jensen did 60 and he's a tough man, strong, healthy..and we'll learn all about how he managed that much in the next chapter :))))
I HAS A PLAN, I HAS A PLAN!!! erm for the flaming arrow thingy, MY BRAIN HAS A PLAN!!!! *coughs* erm.. yeah....
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
next chapter will be up on Wednesday :)
S.
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Date: 2011-11-06 05:10 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-11-06 05:13 pm (UTC)I know, I know, but we all saw it coming :))))) but all is well now, or erm well it will be well :)))
thank you so much for reading and yes, the next chapter will be up on Wednesday :)
thank you!
S.
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Date: 2011-11-06 05:43 pm (UTC)That this was Jensen Ackles, the hero who would save them all. The hero whose blood needed to be spilled on the land by a man born of magic. Goosebumps, goosebumps, goosebumps
This chapter was brilliant, brutal and I'm loving the shit out of it! Oh my god and the flaming arrow in the end? It's something huge, isn't it?
And I have to admit this is one of the best and intriguing stories I've read in a long time and not only because Jensen gets whipped...well, not only ;) Magic, hurt!Jensen, mystery and I love your Jared here!
God, I'm rambling again. Loved it, want more :D
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Date: 2011-11-06 05:56 pm (UTC):O are you okay!? so.... *blushes* I whipped the man... heh...and I feel.. fine! because damn it, I wanted to do this to that perfect back (Heaven and Hell, anyone?!) and yeah... LOL
anywho... WAH goosebumps!!! awesome... AWESOME!! MWHAHAHAHHAHAH *insert crazy laugh here*
thank you! and yes something is coming! I'll post more on Wednesday :)
I always wanted to write a story like this.. magic and darkness and Jensen getting whipped and Jared being a knight and YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!! and I AM LOVING the fact that you like it too!! thank you!
hahahah you can ramble all you want.... :)))))
thank you!!!!
hugs
S.
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Date: 2011-11-06 06:23 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2011-11-06 08:45 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-11-06 09:04 pm (UTC)*yey* thank you!
yes, those runes were what was protecting the boys.. Jensen from probably dying and Jared from going insane... :)
yeah he had to go through that, it was written in the cards for him.... 's how destiny works, I guess... or did work... hmmmmm
hmm I think Jared only has problems with whiping strangers, because well ya know.. 's hurting people but I think that he won't be soooo affected with whipping Jensen, because he knows that this was just something that had to be done, no way around it and I think he will become okay with that soon.. :)
arrow!? not telling!
coming? not telling that either! :P
next chapter will be up on Wednesday! :)
thank you so much for reading!
S.
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Date: 2011-11-07 03:42 am (UTC)I lasted until the third installment then I had to read it.
It's fabulous and the flaming arrow is outstanding. I'm thrilled for the next installments!
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Date: 2011-11-07 08:27 am (UTC)I feel..... *blushes* honored that you read even if its not your thing, I feel really... just.. thank you!!! *hugs*... but you know... I DO love fluffiness and sweetness too... I love the boys dark, as in really really dark but between them there has to be some fluff and sweetness... I mean I can make the boys go killing people all over the country but between them... there will always be yeah fluff :))))) even if one of them is doing crazy shit to the other it'll always be done out of love :)
anywho..... *squee* *tackles you to the floor* thank you! :))))
*nods* yes, I'll put the next chapter up on Wednesday :) so happy you read this :)
love
S.
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Date: 2011-11-07 07:17 am (UTC)And I say this? SSSSQQQQUUUUEEEEEEE!!!! Holy shit old blood magic! a sacrifice to cleanse the land of evil *bounce* so very King Arthur, with the ideas of a strong king makes the land strong and a weak king makes the land sick. I love that Jared is doing this to heal the land, and that once this is done he is finished he will be free of the horrors he has committed.
Suddenly I get the feeling both men knew their part in this. Did Jensen allow himself to be captured to fulfill the prophecy? And Jared being born of magic, it just gets better.
Now all I need to know is where the hell did that flaming arrow come from and will Jared be able to lok after Jensen while he heals?
*Shakes computer* come on then where is the next pat then? *G*
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Date: 2011-11-07 08:21 am (UTC)thank you! :))))) I wanted it to be painful (but I kinda enjoyed it, because I wanted to whip that man's back since I saw it in Heaven&Hell, I mean talk about PERFECTION) so yeah... :) for me it was fun, but for the readers maybe not so fun :)))))
blood magic... 'm starting to think I should've put that in the warnings, but I did put magic and blood there so... maybe I wanted the readers to play connect the dots :))) 'm evil like that :)
but yeah blood magic.... but not in the sense that now when Jensen's blood has been spilled, the land is pure... not yet *wink* :))))
and funny you should mention King Arthur... the legend of him and everythign around him is just something that I really really love!:) so maybe I kinda took some elements from there and put them in this story... heh :)
and I can't answer any questions, but I do love the direction your questions are going :))))))
LMAO, you crack me up!!!! .... next part will be up on Wednesday :))))
thank you so much for reading, babe!
hugs
S.
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Date: 2011-11-13 03:02 pm (UTC)Again a truly awesome story,thank you for sharing.
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Date: 2011-11-13 03:18 pm (UTC)yes, King Arthur legends are awesome and my favorite middle ages stories :)
and magic is always welcomed :)))))
hugs
S.
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Date: 2011-11-13 04:52 pm (UTC)*hugs*
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Date: 2011-11-13 05:20 pm (UTC)S.
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Date: 2011-11-08 11:10 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-11-09 09:36 am (UTC)yeah magic and blood... powerful stuff... :)
yeah yeah Jensen has to suffer, it is how it was written .. *sigh* but he'll be okay... :)) trust me :)
thank you so much for reading!!!
S.
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Date: 2011-11-09 05:21 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-11-09 09:39 am (UTC)thank you so much for reading and btw, your icon is awesome! love that scene so much! :))))
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Date: 2011-11-09 12:59 pm (UTC)Oh there's more already!!!! *squee!*
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Date: 2011-11-09 01:01 pm (UTC)and the next chapter if you'll read it, will calm you down.... because it's a boring one, just for people like you ;)
thank you!!!!
S.