Lazy Saturday Afternoon

[soncnica]

Title: Lazy Saturday Afternoon
Author: soncnica
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Gen
Characters: Sam, Dean, Bobby
Word count: cca. 800
Summary: It was a lazy Saturday afternoon when Sam was trying to stop his brother from bleeding to death.
Warnings: I think none... maybe blood, and hurt!Dean
Disclaimer: I seriously only own the grammar/spelling mistakes. Everything else is not mine! NOT MINE! ALL IS FICTION!
A/N: Thank you for reading.

It was a lazy Saturday afternoon, one of those when you put up your feet and lie back on the couch to stare at the television for hours on end, killing all the brain cells that have not yet died.

The sun's shining, the birds are singing, the road is inviting, but you're just too lazy to get up.

The pop corn you've got your hand stuck in is still warm and you're just dying to taste it.

-:-

"Hold on, man… hold on. 's okay, 's alright." soft, whispered words.

"No, nononono, come on, relax." hurried, soft words.

"'s okay, 's okay… hey hey, heyheyhey, keep your arm there… 's okay." softly ordered words.

"I know, hey, I know it hurts but shhhh…" sympathy.

-:-

One of those lazy Saturday afternoons that make you feel like you're invincible, that everything will work out fine in the end, that the afternoon will just stretch itself into infinity and give you an oh so much needed break.

-:-

"Put pressure here, man. Okay? Press down… okay, okay… shhhh, quiet." Hand gripping another hand tightly, fingers slipping in blood.

"Nononono, pressure, Dean, pressure. Okay, yeah, 's it. Good." pressing a hand to a spot where nothing should be pressed but has to be.

"Gonna hurt now, alright? Gonna put my hand over your mouth, shhhh, 's okay…" keeping the screams in, gotta be quiet, gotta be silent.

's gonna hurt.

-:-

Lazy Saturday, the television program sucking so bad, but you just can't move, you can't even reach the remote control, because you're exhausted from the work week and your legs are just so comfy on the table.

You feel lazy and you know it's a sin but seriously… it feels so awesome to just sit back once in a while and do absolutely-fucking-nothing.

-:-

"That's it, 's it. 's okay, sleep, alright? Just sleep, keep your arm there, don't move it, keep it there. 's it. Sleep, alright?"

Breathless words with sweat dripping down his spine.

-:-

But then the afternoon ends and you're stuck with your fingers sticky from popcorn salt, your ass is hurting from all the sitting you did, your legs are cramping, your head hurts, because yeah, you totally lost some brain cells there, the sun is going down and you so wanted to take a walk.

The Saturday afternoon is over and you feel like crap. All your problems are still there, nothing got fixed, you just gave yourself a headache.

Awesome.

-:-

"Gimme coffee. Coffee or I'll die."

"You're a stupid, selfish asshole you know that?"

"Uh, dude, not before my coffee."

"You want coffee? I'll get ya coffee..."

Dean saw with blurry eyes something in his brother's hand that shone in the sunlight that ruled the room.

It was thin and Sam held it up before his eyes, frowning while tapping it with his fingers.

"Here's your coffee, you idiot, straight to your I.V."

Any reply that Dean had on the tip of his tongue was lost in the happy daze of morphine running through his veins.

-:-

"How's he doin'?"

"He asked for coffee."

"That good?"

Sam huffed and smiled: "Thyeah, that awesome."

"'s not his fault, ya know?"

"He got slashed to bits and pieces 'cause he jumped in front of me. How is that not his fault?"

"Saved yer ass." Because he always does that, you moron. Because he'd jump in front of a train to save you, you idiot.

But all that was left unsaid.

Sam huffed. Yeah Dean saved his ass, but he really didn't want to spend his Saturday afternoon keeping his brother from bleeding out on him and dying.

"Thanks for coming, Bobby. The manager's giving me the 'I know you're doing something illegal in that room, boy' look."

"I'll fix it, you just get your brother ready to move."

"Yeah."

He really wanted to spend his Saturday afternoon lazing around, watching television and doing absolutely-fucking-nothing.

The End. 

Comments

[borgmama1of5.livejournal.com]

Lovely bit of irony, and I could just see the boys' interaction as if it were happening on screen.

[soncnica.livejournal.com]

hi! :)

thank you!! *giggles* I can never say NO to some irony :)

awww awesome! aww thank you! :) I was trying really hard to make the boys sound like erm they do :) thank you!!!

S.

[si-star-x.livejournal.com]

Oh, sunflower.. You did a fantastic job with this. <3

[soncnica.livejournal.com]

*hugs* thank you! :)))

S.

[dizzojay.livejournal.com]

I love this - the alternating between what Sam would like to be doing and what he is actually doing is just fabulous.

Good old Bobby, I love the way he always sticks upfor Dean :)

Great job on this x

[soncnica.livejournal.com]

hey you! :)

hahah yeah.. and Sam just wanted a lazy Saturday like you and I can afford, but he.... no no no.. no lazy Saturdays for him... poor baby :)

thank you!!! yeah it was like.. slow lazyness and then fast BOOMBOOMBOOM of Sam saving Dean and slow and fast.. I so wanted to write this kinda fic for a long time! :) whooot..

ahahha.. Bobby.. well he did say that Dean is his favorite :O

thank you so much! :)))

S.

[dizzojay.livejournal.com]

I loved when Bobby said Dean was his favourite, I think I might have cheered just a little bit :)

[soncnica.livejournal.com]

hahaha.... well I was a bit... WHAT?! :O
I mean... I just hope that because of that Sam won't get a shortage of love from Bobby, because we all know Sam needs some (fatherly) love too, ya know!?
and favoriting a kid... I mean yeah parents do that... 's kinda hard to avoid, but still.. seems kinda cruel, huh!?
idk..

[dizzojay.livejournal.com]

I let Bobby off because he was under Dean's truth curse at the time!

[soncnica.livejournal.com]

oh no, 'm not mad at Bobby and yeah he was under a curse, but still...

[somer.livejournal.com]

Oh yeah, loved the varying dynamic in the different parts, from lazy to frantic and hurt!Dean is always a plus ;)

[soncnica.livejournal.com]

*squee* thank you! :))) I was so going for the SLOW and FAST effect :) yey.. it worked!

and those poor boys... can't have a lazy Saturday.. *sigh* not like you and I can have it... :(

thank you so much for reading! :)

S.

[dante-s-hell.livejournal.com]

I liked this very much!

[soncnica.livejournal.com]

*beams* thank you so much! :))))))

S.

[dehavilland.livejournal.com]

Oh, such loveliness. Sam's dialogue was absolutely perfect.

[soncnica.livejournal.com]

hey :)

thank you!!! *beams* thank you so much! :)

aww you liked Sam's dialogue!? *squee* awesome, thank you!! means a lot to me to know that I did Sam well :))) he's really hard to write :)

thank you so much!

S.

[dehavilland.livejournal.com]

I felt like it was very sweet and certainly in character. It's funny because I'm the opposite, I find Sam easier to write than Dean because Dean's flirtiness is so far beyond me, lol. :D

[soncnica.livejournal.com]

hey :)

thank you! :) I just so wanted to write me some comfort and have Sam doing all the comforting :) LOL

oh man... I envy you... Dean is soo easy to write, but Sam... I never know where I am with Sam.. he's book smart, but Dean is street smart, and Sam has this way of saying things.. and he has all these words that he always says over and over again and it's sooo hard to write him.. idk... :)
but Dean... haha.. he's awesome :) LOL

S.

[dehavilland.livejournal.com]

Maybe we'll have to collaborate one day! :D

[soncnica.livejournal.com]

I would very much like to do that one day! maybe this summer sometime.. :)

(right now I'm really busy with writing my degree, but I should be done by June)

and I would love to do a fic with someone then.. if you'd be up for it :))

S.

[ladytiferet.livejournal.com]

That's Winchesters all right :)

[soncnica.livejournal.com]

LOL :)
yeah... they never get a break... not even on a Saturday :) poor boys...

thank you for reading!!!

S.

[wynefred.livejournal.com]

Nice! I love the way you flipped between a lazy Saturday afternoon to a Winchester Saturday afternoon. Poor Dean. lol

[soncnica.livejournal.com]

ahahha :) thank you! :)

yeah we can all get a lazy Saturday afternoon at least sometimes, but the boys can never get a break... those poor boys :)))

thank you so much for reading :)

S.

[rince1wind.livejournal.com]

Enjoyed this -- nice structure, interesting approach.

[soncnica.livejournal.com]

Hey :)

thank you! :)

I always love to experiment with different structures and writing styles... keeps me on my toes and the readers not bored LOL :)))

thank you! :))

S.

[tracys-dream.livejournal.com]

Brilliant story!

[soncnica.livejournal.com]

*beams* thank you!!!!

S.

[mayhsgirl93.livejournal.com]

awesome fic! Love the contrast between what normal people do and what Sam and Dean do!

you totally got their characters down perfectly!!

[soncnica.livejournal.com]

heya :)
thank you! :)

yeah.. those poor boys.. they never get a normal Saturday... it's all action for them...at least we can get that lazy Saturday afternoon where we do nothing, but the boys.. idk... they probably never do :)
and I so wanted to write something like this for a long time :)))))

thank you soooo much! :)))

S.

[randomstasis.livejournal.com]

Nice- love the flip-flop between his normal life and his real life, and this-
"You want coffee? I'll get ya coffee..."

lol, Sam is such a bitch when he's upset!

[soncnica.livejournal.com]

hey :)))

thank you! :) thank you so much for reading :)
so happy you liked that.... yeah just slow vs. fast, us vs. them... our Saturday vs. their Saturday! :)

ahahhaha, yeah LMAO! Sam... *sigh* I wouldn't mind him bitching at me, though :))) LOL

thank you!!!

S.

[randomflamingo.livejournal.com]

Very nice. And as always with these boys- emotional and conflicted.

[soncnica.livejournal.com]

HEY!!!! :)))

thank you! :)

yeah... I sometimes feel sooo sorry for these boys. I mean can they just have a nice, lazy, watching TV, feet on the table kinda Saturday? *sighs*

thank you so much for reading! :))

S.

[spnmermaid.livejournal.com]

That was pretty damn good! I really enjoyed the way it skipped from chilled out to totally panicked. You managed to capture the feeling of one of those lazy afternoons really well too!

[soncnica.livejournal.com]

Hi :)

pretty damn good? *beams*

thank you! and this story kinda makes me sad, because damn, but WHY can't the boys just get a normal lazy Saturday afternoon, like we can?! huh!? but then again, maybe if they would, they'd go crazy! LOL :)))

thank you so much for reading!

S.