The Hunt 3/?
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soncnicaAuthor: soncnica
Rating: 'NC-17' later, but 'R' this chapter
Genre/pairing: Jared/Jensen AU
Characters: Jared, Jensen
Word count: cca. 3.300 this chapter
Summary: It's the time of The Hunt again. And this year Jensen has to participate. Jared is a werewolf who hasn't found his mate yet in all the years he's been participating in The Hunt. But this year... he smells something he wants.
Warnings: *takes a deep breath* werewolf!Jared, bloodplay, branding, barebacking, biting, mental links, chuffing/presten, scenting, skitish!Jensen (but not too much, he is a man after all), language, dirty talk, age difference (Jared is 28, Jensen is 18), NO CHARACTER DEATH, NOT UNDERAGE, NO BESTIALITY (that means no Jared as wolf having sex with Jensen, okay a little scene, but it's 'you blink and it's gone' trust me), and a lot more warnings to come. I'll post warnings with chapters, so THIS CHAPTER: blood, dark(ish).
Disclaimer: I seriously only own the grammar/spelling mistakes. Everything else is not mine! NOT MINE! ALL IS FICTION! FICTION I TELL YA!!!!
A/N: I wanted to post this chapter on Friday, but I just found out that I won't have time then.. so... here it is. Writen for this prompt at spn_hardcore animalistic behavior meme. PLEASE READ THE A/N IN THE STORY!
Thank you all so very much for reading and commenting... all your comments mean so much to me... thank you!!!!
Enjoy...
He was born on a night that was more occupied with the rage of the storm that spread across the forest, then his birth. Thunder and lightning, noises of big, fat raindrops hitting trees and leaves, stone and ground were nothing compared to the screams coming from the caves interior.
The screams were bouncing off the bare stony walls, echoing and gathering up all the screams that had not yet died down, before they all together escaped the narrow entrance into the stormy night, leaving empty space to be filled with more screams.
The smell of blood, sweat and tears coming from the cave's entrance, the sound of the screams, the anticipation of a new member arriving, send dozen of soaking wet wolves who were pacing outside in the rain into howling.
The forest was full of noises; howling, barking, rain, thunder, lightning, trees rubbing each other in the wind, braking branches, sending green leaves to fly in the wind before they were knocked to the floor by the heavy rain drops… sobbing, crying, screaming… howling.
The woman inside the cave was screaming herself hoarse, crying and sobbing, clutching at bear skins, the soft fur curled between her delicate fingers, sweat running down her face, her black hair completely wet and plastered to her cheeks... the howling she could hear from outside soothed her, it was like a soft caress down her cheeks, her neck, her breasts, her swollen belly… telling her that everything would be alright. Her husband's rough tongue was licking her nipples, trying to distract her from the pain and she wrapped her hand in his fur, tugging at it, tugging her husband closer to her.
Lightning.
Howling.
Thunder.
Howling.
Screaming.
Howling.
Screaming.
Howling.
Lightning.
Howling.
Thunder.
Howling.
Screaming.
Howling.
Lightning.
Howling.
Thunder.
Howling.
Screaming.
Lightning stroke somewhere close by, striking at the precise moment the baby came into the world and the sharp crack of thunder that followed disguised the child's piercing cry, silencing it, preventing the wolves outside to hear it properly and that send the herd into more howling, louder then before.
They wanted to hear the new member of the pack cry, hear him be alive, hear their new brother breathe and cry and live.
They barked and howled up at the dark sky.
"Jared." The woman half sobbed, half whispered when a baby boy was placed in her sweaty hands; the baby's eyes light blue, like a cloudless sky, his hair blond and his little fingers already grabbing for his mothers.
Her husband started licking the baby; gathering all the fluids the child had on his little body with its tongue and swallowing it down, tasting his wife and their child. When there was nothing left on the baby, when his skin was completely clean, the wolf changed into a man, kissed his wife and ran a finger down his boy's clean cheek.
"Jared!!!" he yelled out loud, telling everyone outside and inside his baby boy's name.
Lightning and thunder stopped when the baby began to cry in earnest, the rain following slowly, easing down to a cold drizzle that fell lightly on the naked bodies of people waiting outside to be called in, to see their new family member, their brother.
The son of their Alpha.
Out of respect even the drizzle stopped in seconds.
A child of nature has been born and nature showed her respect to him.
And that is how the man was named Jared, and the wolf will be named Grom.
Jared was barely learning how to crawl, going up on his shaky legs, not yet trusting them to carry his full weight; he always fell on his behind whenever he tried to really rise up, which send him into fits of giggles or fits of crying.
His momma often had to call after him, her voice soft and gentle: "Jared, sweetie, stay here, baby." but he was curious, he wanted to go outside, out of the cave to see where he was, what those noises were, what that smell was and where his dada went.
His father always went somewhere and came back all hairy and smelly and short; shorter then when he went away and he had sharp teeth and smelly breath, but he was so soft when touched and he made noises that soothed and calmed and Jared loved that.
But, he also came back smelly and momma often had to say to him in fits of laughter while trying not to blush before her child, while her husband had its tail between her legs, putting pressure just in the right places: "Get you and your tail to the river, you smell like you've been rolling in death all day long."
Jared didn't know it then, but… his dada was rolling in death all day.
Jared giggled and fell on his well cushioned – his momma often whispered to him while kissing his tummy: "Diapers, Jared, diapers are awesome." - behind, reaching up his hands for his momma to pick him up.
"Your daddy'll be back soon, sweetie, just a little longer."
He moved his left arm towards his momma's nose and squealed when he saw the color of her eyes changing.
"Uuuuuuhh…" he said and wanted to grab the fleeing colors in his momma's eyes, but couldn't, because she stopped his little hand and kissed all of his five fingers, one by one.
"Your daddy'll be back soon, come on, let's get you to bed, baby."
He was sleeping; his eight month old body exhausted from the day of playing with his momma and the other wolves, when something cold and wet started to nudge him under his chin.
He woke up to see black fur in his line of sight and he lifted up his little hands to touch it. He laughed out loud, a giggle that the wolf responded to with licking his cheeks.
The wolf's breath smelled making Jared scrunch up his face and cry, like babies do when they don't like something.
The wolf stopped licking and looked at him, moving its head to the right, to the left until it settled there and it gave out a little whine. Jared could see it had such bright eyes, such beautiful eyes that he wanted to touch them, but then the wolf lowered its head again and started to lick his cheeks, his nose, his hair, his forehead… and that made Jared stop crying, only small hiccups remaining. The fur was soft beneath his chubby fingers, and the wolf… smelled like his dada.
"Dada."
The wolf licked Jared's lips, raised its head up high and gave out a noise that startled Jared and he began to cry again.
His dada was howling.
Jared tightened his fingers in his dada's fur, while he slowly stopped crying; the shock of hearing such a loud noise wearing off and he blinked when the wolf looked down at him, bared its large, sharp teeth and barked.
"Dada."
Jared said again, tears in his voice, but he wasn't afraid. This was his dada and his dada always protected him, his dada never hurt him.
The wolf made that noise again, but this time Jared laughed out loud, petting his dada's sides, grabbing hold of the soft strands of the fur, tugging on them until the wolf stopped the loud noise and whimpered. He released his grip, didn't wanna hurt his dada.
He giggled when dada looked at him.
"Dada."
The noise started again, the wolf rising up its head and Jared's little fingers wrapped themselves in the white fur underneath the wolf's neck. He could feel vibrations go up and down his arms and into his body shaking every little bone he had.
The noise went on and on and on and Jared was getting sleepy again, the noise a lullaby to his ears, the vibrations like someone was rocking his crib, when he felt the drooly tongue on his cheeks again, licking his nose and mouth and neck.
The rough tongue stayed at his neck for a long time, making each lick hurt more and more when the nerves in the sensitive skin came alive, and just as Jared was about to start crying again his dada sank those huge, sharp teeth into the place where his shoulder meets his neck and Jared cried out, lungs burning.
Then there was darkness.
Pain wrapped in darkness.
Blood wrapped in darkness.
Bones realigning, breaking, twisting… wrapped in darkness.
Skin shifting, stretching, pulling… wrapped in darkness.
The taste of his dada's blood in his mouth… wrapped in darkness.
There was just darkness in which he didn't hear the barks of: "Grom's born! Grom is born!" followed by howling.
He woke up in the same cave he fell asleep in, in the same rabbit skins filled corner and with the same view on the moss covered wall, but… it was all different. He was different. He could sense that, he could feel that, he… there was hair all over his body, sticky with blood, sweat and tears. He was shivering, the smell of blood, fresh meat and mud in his nose half of it making him wanna puke and the other half making him so hungry he felt a string of saliva drop down from his mouth.
The sounds coming to his ears were too many and too loud.
Smells were too many and too invasive, burning his nose and throat.
The sight was too sharp and bright.
Touch was yet to be experienced.
He wanted to cry, but all he could do was whine, a weird little noise from deep in his throat that he never made before. He tried to get up on his legs and arms to crawl, but he found no arms, just legs. Too many legs… but they made crawling real easy. They were short, close to the ground, a bit shaky, the ends of them too wide and touch… was sensitive. He could feel every pebble and twig that he stepped on, every wet patch of soil felt like he stepped in a pond.
He fell down with a hufff, legs going in every direction and there was nothing to cushion his fall this time, there was just the hard, cold ground beneath his spread legs. He wanted to cry, but could only whine again when he pulled his legs towards himself and rose up, slowly and surly on his four legs that carried him out of the cave.
The bright sun almost burned out his eyes; it was too bright and too hot but when his eyes adjusted to it…what he saw… was breathtaking.
He saw trees, raising high up to the sky, almost touching it with their branches; some tree trunks were thin and tall, some were fat and small, disfigured with roots going in every direction above the ground.
Good place to play.
But later.
He made a few tiny steps forward, still testing the waters with all those legs, the ground beneath his sensitive feet was full of leaves and needles that were so soft, like walking on bear skins.
The whole ground rustled softly when he pawed at it, scratched at it with his newly gained claws, knowing without anyone telling him, that he was already marking his territory.
The sunlight was brightly yellow making its way between all those trees painting the forest in beautiful summer colors that reminded him of his momma's eyes.
The smell of pine trees was sharp in his nose and there was a noise… like water running without stopping... that surrounded his head and went into his ears.
There were mountains way in the back, going up higher then the trees; their heads were white with snow that never melts, their middles gray with stone that's always washed by rain and the rest was hidden by trees.
He could smell all kinds of trees and all kinds of animals and so many other things that were coming to him in a rush, but what he could smell the most was blood.
The smell made him hungry, so hungry he could feel it deep down in his bones; this ache so deep, he growled softly.
It was coming from somewhere to his left and he turned his head there, ears and nose high up.
He saw dada and wanted to call out, like he did so many times before, but all he did was bark: "Dada".
He startled himself. He could talk, just not… talk talk.
Dada, who was surrounded by other wolves, looked right into his eyes and barked: "Jared, come eat."
Jared didn't need to be told twice. He made a few more steps towards other wolves that were tearing a huge animal apart right in front of the cave's entrance. It had been freshly killed, because the blood was still warm when a white wolf placed some meat before him: "Eat baby, come on, I know you're hungry. Eat, 's good."
It tasted amazing, better then anything he ever ate before. It tasted alive, it tasted bloody and fresh and he chewed on the little piece of meat savoring the taste in his mouth and trying to remember the feeling of it sliding down his throat to settle in his stomach.
He watched others from the corner of his eye; how only a few were eating and how some were in the background pacing left and right, whimpering or barking: "Will you be done soon? Alpha? Soon? We're starving."
Dada growled back: "When we're done, Wait. Your. Turn."
Jared had never heard such tone in his dada's voice before. His dada scared him.
He took another bite of the meat and almost lost the ground beneath his four legs with how good the meat tasted.
Jared was munching on his tiny pieces of meat that the white wolf kept bringing him, when his dada started to walk away from the animal and others came rushing in and attacked what was left of it, tearing strings of flesh from already chewed on bones. They were starving, Jared could tell.
They fought between themselves, barked and growled and bit each other sometimes to the point of blood – Jared could smell it in the air - tackled others to the floor and took pieces of flesh right out of their brother's mouths.
Jared understood then. His blood was theirs, their blood was his. He was their and they were his. His brothers. His family. He understood without anyone having to tell him.
And when they were finished with eating, they tackled them to the floor and licked all the blood and mud off of him.
Family. Pack. Forever.
So, he was just a cub, barely out of his momma's den, shaky legs and messed up fur sticking to all directions when he learned about what he is. What he has become. What his dada made him.
Werewolf. Part man, part wolf. Immortal, unless killed by a silver bullet straight to the heart or the way his dad told him, when he sat him on his knees: "Eternity, Jared... or unless something chews out your brain. You have to be careful, son. Immortality has a price too in with us, it's watch.your.back."
He didn't think about it too much, it didn't bother him that he could be a man or a wolf, because he had been like that since he was just a baby and everyone loved him, took care of him and in return he took care of them. And being the son of the pack's Alpha had its… advantages. He could eat first, he could lead his pack on the hunt, he was next in line for the position and everyone loved him. Sure, his wolf side was a nasty son of a bitch, but his human side was as gentle as they come.
And it was family. It just was how it was and when he saw wolves change into people; men, women, children, or humans change into wolves… that was just the way it was. When they ate it was family, when they hunted it was family, when they slept it was family.
It was life. In a pack.
And being a werewolf had another perk in a long list of perks and when his father told him about it - when he was only thirteen - he nearly jumped through the roof.
"You can grow as old as you want to, Jared. And when you reach an age you want to spend eternity in, you stop."
"Stop? Stop what?"
"Growing old."
"Huh?"
His father laughed with a loud and deep booming sound that shook some leaves from the branches over their heads. Or maybe that was just the wind.
"But… but how does that work? I mean, I can't just say 'oh I'm twenty now, I think I have enough of this ageing shit, I think I'll stop now', right?"
"'s exactly what you'll do. But, you must not be younger then twenty. It's forbidden. Your wolf side would be too young and you wouldn't be able to breed. And don't say shit anymore."
Jared rolled his eyes at his dad: "But you? You're old."
"I'm the Alpha."
Another perk of being a werewolf especially one of the Bele Jame tribe?
The Hunt.
It's something every cub dreams of since the Alpha tells him about it.
The Hunt.
He knows the story, he knows what the villagers have done; how they killed what did not belong to them, how they picked up berries that did not belong to them, how they filled their animal skins with water that did not belong to them. How they killed and skinned his kin to eat it later. How they murdered and stolen what was not theirs.
The Hunt.
Without it, without the humans sacrificing their blood, their children… Jared's tribe would attack. And it would kill.
But a pact was made by Raki, the human and Looraa, the Alpha. The pact was made and it needs to be honored; boys at eighteen, girls as soon as they're born.
The Hunt.
Where his brothers had always found mates, food or just entertainment. But it's a pact that has to be honored by both sides no matter what; no matter the bloodshed, no matter the pain.
The Hunt.
Jared has seen a lot of humans be dragged, kicking and screaming or half dead already, to the centre of the Bele Jame cave system, pushed or dropped to the floor like a dead animal and bitten, scratched, clawed or simply ripped apart until all the blood slowly ran away from them, making a puddle on the stones where it could be smelled for days on end, sizzling on the hot sun.
Hell, he has done that himself plenty. And the thrill of it… of sinking his sharp teeth into that soft flesh and ripping it apart, making the body underneath him choke on its own blood, feel the heat slowly disappear from it, scrape his teeth on delicate bones… his wolf loves those moments. Loves them so much that he's always the first one there, the first one to sink his teeth in the human's neck and tear it apart. He's the Alpha's son, it's his right.
The Hunt.
And when babies are brought to the caves, females, they're protected and treated like the most precious things on earth and he has smelled and heard his brothers mate with them when the babies turned teenagers. The females are the ones who give children; they're the ones who'll make sure that the tribe of the Bele Jame cave system will never stop existing.
But Jared has seen his share of deaths too – when the girls just weren't able to bear children or when they died of all kinds of things, Jared doesn't even wanna think about.
He has seen.
But he does not think about it.
The Hunt.
The Hunt that is followed by either death or mating, because Jared has smelled and heard some of his brother's mate with warriors too. Warriors that later became his brothers.
And that… is another thing he doesn't think about much. The blood in his veins accepts everyone as his family. Everyone that his brothers bring, mate with and keep.
The Hunt.
The Hunt sealed by blood.
The Hunt; a pact made by two hunters.
It shall be honored.
His dad still keeps the sharp knife of Raki's the pact was sealed with in his chamber. It still has dried blood on it.
The Hunt.
Where he will find his mate one day.
One day…
TBC...
CHAPTER 2 _II_ CHAPTER 4P.S.1 "GROM" is a Slovenian (my mother tongue) word for "THUNDER"!
P.S. 2 "BELE JAME" in Slovene means "WHITE CAVES":), and Jared will explore them in the next chapter :)
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Date: 2011-03-09 06:21 pm (UTC)Baby pup Jared was so cute and sweet.
Im so looking forward to read much more.
Pleaseeee update soon.
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Date: 2011-03-09 06:33 pm (UTC)thank you! :)
aww 'm so happy you liked Jared as a pup, I like him as a pup too... *d'awww* :), but when he'll grow up, he won't be so... erm.. sweet :)
I'll update next week sometime, dunno when because THERE's soooo much I need to write in the next chapter! :)
THANK YOU!!!!!
S.
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Date: 2011-03-09 06:50 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-03-09 07:14 pm (UTC)LOL, you're welcome! :) no need to thank me...:) I just found out that I won't have time to post this on Friday, so I said: WTH lets just post this thing! :)
you did!? you liked it...?! awesome, thank you so much... and there will be more of Jared's view on the hunt and about the caves and his life and his search... but that'll be in the next chapter :)!
phew... the 'vibe' is important... you tell me when the story stops having a vibe and just becomes meh! okay?! :)
OKAY?!:)))
thank you so muuuuch! :)))
S.
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Date: 2011-03-09 07:20 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-03-09 07:28 pm (UTC)knotting 1, no knotting 0
seriously, 'm collecting votes here although I'm like 89% sure I'll include knotting :)) LOL :)
thank you so much!!!!!!!
S.
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Date: 2011-03-09 07:35 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-03-09 07:36 pm (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2011-03-09 08:13 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-03-09 08:19 pm (UTC)and for your help :) thank you! :)
and yeah true to the story, knotting NEEDS to be in here... so.... yeah... I think I'll include it... I mean people have spoken, right? :)
so yeah... knotting it is then :)
THANK YOU!!!!!!!!
S.
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Date: 2011-03-09 08:15 pm (UTC)As to the question you asked before the chapter, I'm afraid I'm no help here. I'd happily read whatever you decided to write. ;p
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Date: 2011-03-09 08:21 pm (UTC)and there will be more.. more on the village, and more about the caves... before the boys'll meet :) I'm thinking... next chapter will be Jared's and then the next one still Jensen and then they'll meet :)
awesome! okay.... :) great.... as of now... people have spoken and they are for knotting! :) so... heh... knotting it is :)
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING! :)
S.
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Date: 2011-03-09 08:19 pm (UTC)I can't wait to see what happens when it's Jensen's turn to become a part of the hunt. *shivers with excitement*
On the notion of knotting. I think that you should include it. As you said, they're wolves, even when they're in human form they're not quite human and wolves knot. If you don't add it I don't think it will take anything away from the story but if you do include it I think it will add a lot. That's just my opinion, you can do what you like, lol. :)
I'm really happy to say that your tenses are a lot better than the first chapter, bravo. :D Although there's another grammar thing I'd like to point out, just cause it's a pet hate of mine. Sometimes you use the word "then" instead of "than", might be something to keep an eye on. :)
Wonderful story so far, I'm really looking forward to seeing where you take it from here. :D
*hugs you and your awesomeness*
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Date: 2011-03-09 08:37 pm (UTC)about Jared: yeah, he got turned as a baby, and became a wolf and because of that, he doesn't think a lot about it, because he doesn't know anything else... :) and yeah the wildness is well wild and he's part of it and he's wild and he's a wolf and we'll see that more in the next chapter when he'll be more grown up and be a true wolf :) and his life is brutal, but also loving.. I mean he's constantly surrounded by his family, his loving huge family, which is more then we can say for Jensen, huh!? so happy you liked this
about Jensen: heh... it will be... hard and confusing and he'll be scared... hell I'd be too... my biggest concern with Jensen and the hunt is that I'll make him sound like a girl... oh God if that happens shoot me! I will TRY my best to keep him a scared 18 year old man :)
about knotting: my thoughts exactly... they are wolves, wolves knot, it is how it is and yes, IF I didn't include it then the story would be well... crap... because idk, a lot of people forget that wolves knot :) but I just wanted to ask people who read this their opinion, ya know!? :) but the people have spoken and knotting it is :) man, oh man... how will I describe the pain with that one!? :O hmmm.... I'll think of something...
about grammar: *headdesk* then and than... damn it... grrrr... BUT at least I fixed my tenses *grins and pats herself on her shoulder*
I should go over the chapter and fix those then and than's... :)
THANK YOU FOR TELLING ME!! and please, please.. tell me if you see anything else later on... :)))
thank you so much, 'm really happy you're liking this :)))))) whoooot!
*hugs you and your awesome comment* :)
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Date: 2011-03-09 09:07 pm (UTC)It was interesting to see how very different he and Jensen were raised. I'm looking forward to reading about Jared's explorations, and maybe even him running across a certain young boy? :)
As far as the question you asked, I'm going to happily read either way. Personally, it seems to me like knotting fits with the way you are writing about the differences between werewolves and humans. And it kind of sounds like (I hope I'm not reading too much into what you wrote) you think it should be that way. So, I guess that is my very loooong-winded way of voting pro-knot! :D
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Date: 2011-03-09 09:24 pm (UTC)and about the bloodlust... ummm.. okay.. a spoiler: Jared as a wolf is very very agressive, very well animal like, and wolves do go for the neck when they hunt and they do rip flesh off of their kill... and in this story the humans who are in The Hunt are pray in some way...right!?:) BUT Jared as a man is the most sweet and gentle, wouldn't hurt a fly kinda man :) and THAT difference will kinda screw with Jensen's head a bit, but not much.... idk how to explain without telling too much :) *smiles*
and the bloodlust wasn't really all that vividly described... was it!? idk... I just so love details and all and maybe I can get a bit carried away sometimes :))) sowwy :)
mhm, YESSS! I wanted to somehow SHOW that Jared and Jensen are completely different, completely differently raised, Jensen with his loving mom and Jared with this huge, huge, loving family... :)
and LOL :))) ahhahah, Jared will meet Jensen... ummm I have it planned like this: next chapter will be Jared, then the next one will be Jensen and then the 3rd one will be them meeting :) *grins* so.. 3 more chapters!? yeah.... we can do that, right!? :)
I have decided that knotting it is... every one until now said that knotting would be okay and so yeah... knotting it is :) because like you said: this story has to have that, it fits in the story... because Jared ain't a man, he's a wolf, no matter what... so yeah... and yeah I do think it should be that way, I just wanted to see if people think that is should be that way too :)))
THANK YOU SOOO VERY MUCH FOR YOUR awesome COMMENT!!! IT means a lot to me when people take the time and tell me things... what they like what they hate, what worked for them and what didn't :)))
THANK YOU!
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Date: 2011-03-10 12:35 am (UTC)I say based on how this section is written -that I would go with a knot no matter whether Jared is in Human or Wolf form. Knotting is to increase chance of fertilization and in such a wild and hard life - one where you must be able to breed that the knot would be a logical adaption
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Date: 2011-03-10 11:06 am (UTC)ha, yeah.. I did up the danger :) because I wanna make the readers understand that these are not people, not like you and I are.. these are animals, wolves, and even when they are 'humans' they aren't.. not really :)
and yeah some people who are hunted down don't make it, but the girls don't make it because of illness or die at child birth, but we'll get to that in some of the next chapter :))) the girls are treated with respect and love that they deserve, but unfortunantly disease or something else does kill them....
hmm breed even if it's not your mate!? no, I won't go down that road... because we see that Jared's mom loves her mate, and we'll see in other chapters that everyone is very much ''in love'' with whoever chose them for mates... :)))
YES! I agree with you... and I have decided that I will do the knotting... because they are wolves, even in human form, they are still part wolf :) and wolves knot! :)
THANK YOU for your awesome comment :))))))
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Date: 2011-03-10 12:40 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-03-10 11:07 am (UTC)S.
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Date: 2011-03-10 12:41 am (UTC)Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Date: 2011-03-10 11:08 am (UTC)THANK YOU!!!
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Date: 2011-03-10 04:03 am (UTC)This is so good! I love werewolf tales, and I like the darker side to this one that you normally don't see. So anxious to see Jensen's day. Terrified for him though! Even knowing he will survive, its what he'll see happen to his childhood friends that is terrifying me!
The suspense of the build up is great and I like the two sides, human and wolf, knowing what each 'tribe' is thinking/doing. Also really love the detail of the wolf society you were able to explain without droning on. It is really interesting and you incorporated so smoothly into the story line.
I'll stop babbling now! :) Cant wait for more!
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Date: 2011-03-10 11:14 am (UTC)I love werewolf tales too... I mean wolves are my favorite animal and it's just sooooo awesome to write this story for me:) I'm enjoying every word that I write and I'm so happy that you're liking this too :)
awesome icon btw :))))
Jensen yeah... heh... he'll have a lot of time to think about what goes on in The Hunt... poor boy! *shakes head*
but yeah he will survive, but his friends... well.. idk... we'll see *grins*
whooot... thank you! I'm always so scared that this buld up is becoming boring BUT it just has to be here... I wanna show, like you said, the difference between Jensen's and Jared's lives, and how their society is sooo totally different... and you can almost start to see how Jensen will deal with Jared's pack and how Jared will deal with Jensen and how he was raised... it'll be fun, sad, disturbing etc. you know!? 'm so happy you're liking this :))) thank you!
hmmm, yeah I wanted to show how wolves function, the pack and the hierarhy, without coming off like I'm lecturing people, because I'm pretty sure that a lot of people KNOW how the wolf pack functions... right!? so yeah it would be sooo lame if I'd go and explain every little detail of the wolf's lives :) right!? whoooot... so happy you picked up on that :))))
awww I love people who babble.. makes me feel normal... ehehhe :)))
THANK YOU SO MUCH and heh, I should thank your will power :)))
S.
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Date: 2011-03-10 04:13 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-03-10 11:19 am (UTC)oh man, I had such fun writing baby Jared.... I just wanted to pinch his cheeks :) thank you for liking him too :)
about knotting.. hmm compromise!? idk, I don't think I can compromise... it's... Jared is part wolf, and wolves knot so in that form he has to... and then he's part human, but only PART human... all of his body is adjusted to wolf 'form' ya know!? he's still an animal even in human form... right!? I mean at least I see it that way.. idk.. THAT is why I asked people to tell me their opinion :)
and a lot of people said that knotting should be in here... and I'm okay with that, because it would be human/human knotting and not wolf/human (because THAT would make me really uncomfortable)... so yeah... knotting it is :) and it would just fit with the story, right!? yeah....
and as for stamina.. Jared will have that.. have it a lot! :)) poor Jensen :)) LOL
THANK YOU SO MUCH for telling me your view on this matter! :))))
S.
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Date: 2011-03-10 04:43 am (UTC)I am loving what you are doing with my prompt - I love that you are embracing the wolf part of werewolf. Jared's pack is hierarchical and animalistic, while still being family and pack. I can't wait 'til Questioning!Jensen is brought back to the pack, I can't imagine his transition will be all that smooth lets say (at least the taken girls are raised in the pack, so it's not strange or such a shift as it is for the "warriors" taken.)
As always - I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Date: 2011-03-10 11:25 am (UTC)yeah, the Elders were right... but the question is HOW do they know what happens to the humans!? *evil grin* hmmmm :)
I AM LOVING THAT YOU ARE LOVING WHAT I'M DOING WITH YOUR PROMPT!!!!!!!! *hugs*
I uh... understood your prompt that you wanted animalistic behaviou, that you wanted ummm the wolf to be a wolf, right!? so... phew.. I understood right :) phew :)
and yeah Jared's pack is hierarchical and family, bond! like it is in the real wild :) and I wanted to show the difference, between how Jensen was raised and how Jared was raised... Jensen with his loving mother, his dad a drunk, while Jared has this HUGE, awesome, loving family that takes care of him and all... so yeah when Jensen will come to the pack... it will be sad, confusing, fun, disturbing... because the boys were raised completely different :)))) hee, and I hope you'll like what I'll come up with :) I hope... :)
and yeah as for the girls.... they are used to it because they have been growing up in that pack from the very start, so like Jared, they aren't scared or anything :)
awesome!
THANK YOU!!!
S.
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Date: 2011-03-10 06:45 am (UTC)The stark reality of his true nature is painted beautifully, between the violence and the love and compassion of family. So yeah, I liked :) lol.
As per knotting, it depends on how closely you'd want to follow the OP and your comfort level. Your level of squick on the matter because if it makes you terribly uncomfortable, then by all means - no. Is it necessary? I'd say no; personally, I'd get the picture. Would it be hot...depends on how it's written.
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Date: 2011-03-10 11:32 am (UTC)heee, glad you liked :) seriously, Jared is way too much fun to write, 's disturbing... :)))
*beams* thank you! I ADORE NATURE.... when I write SPN fics... the boys are always in a forest or somewhere like that.. because I just... LOVE LOVE LOVE the woods and it's kinda hard not to, because where I live.. well .. it's like I live in the middle of a forest :)
anywho.... yesss, WILD.. he is wild because nature made him wild! he's a wolf, and he hunts and he kills and he's rough and nasty, but also loving especially to his own people :)
thank you!!!!!!!
knotting... my comfort level is pretty high with everything, really, BUT animal/human sex.. that I can not do and will not do... *shudders*
BUT.. in this story, there will ONLY be human/human sex, so I'm okay with writing knotting in those scenes... I just really really wanted to hear what people thought about this subject and heee, I got my answers and knotting it is :)))))
and I'm okay with that, because it will be human/human, well parthuman/human sex and that's okay...
and I think that for the story to be true to erm wolf nature, I think knotting has to be in the story... right!? because wolves do knot, and Jared even in his human form, he's not human, he's still part wolf! his whole body is adjusted to being a wolf... so yeah.. I'm okay with it :)))
and I will do my best to.. make it... hot and readable :)
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! for reading and for telling me your opinion on this :)))
S.
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Date: 2011-03-10 02:28 pm (UTC)I'm sure Jen won't be girly, he's a snarky, strong-willed bastard, even if it takes him some time to get round to it :)
About the knotting thing, I suppose it depends on if you want to keep some other wolf traits in human form too, then it makes sense.
Alternatively, you can be vague with description and signalize it to the point that makes you comfortable.
Or go for it all they way, if that's your kink :D
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Date: 2011-03-10 07:28 pm (UTC)and yup... it is dark... me loooves dark fics, BUT only if that darkness is supposed to be there and it's not forced, you know!?
it's a thing with me, but idk, I could've done a lot more darker, but I chose not to... idk... maybe later *wink*
AND YES! man, I am sooo scared that I'll make him a whiny chick who can't get her shit together... so yeah I'll try to do him snarky, strong-willed, MAN! but like one commenter told me, if I know what the problem is, then the problem is half solved :)
the knotting IS definitely NOT my kink! *blushes* gosh... it makes me just... no! I mean I have nothing against it, and if it's some people's kink that's totally fine with me, I don't judge people, I mean I don't really care what is some people's kink LOL :) but for me it just isn't :)
BUT.... I have decided that this story will have a knotting kink involved... because I feel comfortable doing it with human/halfhuman sex, but animal/human sex is a huge no no! :)
so yeah.... I feel comfortable writing it when it's human/human sex and one of those humans just happens to be a werewolf :) he :)
and I will go all the way... I'll describe it all... as I did until now... idk, sometimes I think that a writer just has to let go of his or her comfort zone and step into the unknown :) right!? :)))))
THANK YOU!!! for commenting and telling me your oppinion on this :)))
S.
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Date: 2011-03-10 07:38 pm (UTC)The son of their Alpha.
Out of respect even the drizzle stopped in seconds.
A child of nature has been born and nature showed her respect to him.
And that is how the man was named Jared, and the wolf will be named Grom.
*GOOSEBUMPS*
And I like Jared´s view of the hunt and the dark tinge it has!
Aaaand...The Hunt. Where he will find his mate one day....yessssss!! :)
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Date: 2011-03-10 07:39 pm (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2011-03-11 06:08 am (UTC)I think a world as fascinating as the one you are writing needs plenty of building up, so I don't think you should worry about moving too slow with this. It's been pretty perfect so far.
I can't wait to see Jared and Jensen meet and interact! It's gonna be awesome. I'm very much looking forward to seeing how you handle it.
In terms of your knotting question, I'd use it. Right now I think it would feel wrong if you didn't. This isn't a "pretty" or "shiny" world you're writing. It's gritty and dark, so to leave the knotting out would feel, IMO, inappropriate.
Great job! Can't wait to read more!
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Date: 2011-03-11 03:50 pm (UTC)THANK YOU! :)
I'm really having so much fun with this world and there are still all these ideas in my head that I wanna write in the next chapters, and the ideas for when the boys will meet and eep :) I'm kinda excited! LOL:)
thank you for liking this world and I'll have to rush Jensen's life up to his 18th bday, because I WANNA write the boys meeting :) :) LOL :))) but I won't rush it THAT much.. just enough :)
*giggles* WELL.... I already have the meeting chapter all writen, I just have to bring the boys there LOL :) but idk, I'm really really hoping that people will like that chapter and that I won't disappoint :)
mhm, yes, my thoughts exactly... the knotting will be there... I have decided, that like you said.. it would just fit the world and its darkness :)
THANK YOU SO MUCH! :))))
S.
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Date: 2011-03-11 11:27 am (UTC)And because of the animalistic nature, the knotting seems to fit so I say go for it. :)
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Date: 2011-03-11 03:52 pm (UTC)thank you!!! 'm so happy you're enjoying this and the world where the boys live in :)))
thank you!
mhm, the knotting will be included.. me has decided :) LOL
because a lot of the commenters think like I do.. that it just fits the world this story is set in, sooooo.. knotting it is :) *grins*
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!
S.
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Date: 2011-03-11 12:54 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-03-11 03:53 pm (UTC)S.
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Date: 2011-03-11 09:25 pm (UTC)Thank you.
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Date: 2011-03-11 09:31 pm (UTC)knotting it is... it would just fit the story, right!? mhm.... :) and the weird thing is... I already wrote the part... with knotting... heh... it was easier then I thought... maybe too detailed, but... well... we'll come to that :)))
THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!
S.
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Date: 2011-03-12 04:09 pm (UTC)I love knotting so i say the more knotting the better lol.
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Date: 2011-03-12 04:11 pm (UTC)thank you!!!! I have to admit... I LOVE this world... I love writing about it and I love how it looks like in my head and I'm sooo happy that you're loving it too :)))))
:) and fear not, there will be knotting, I have decided!!! LOL, I even wrote the scene already... heh...
THANK YOU!!!!
S.
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Date: 2011-03-12 06:28 pm (UTC)It was an awesome chapter. I absolutely loved it.
You wrote a great introduction into Jared's life/world. Not to mention, cub-Jared was sooooo cute. *melts*
Concerning the knotting: it would really fit with the tone of your story. The werewolfs being a bit wild etc. I'm glad to see you've decided to write about it. Who knows, maybe you'll get over the feeling weird part. ;-)
Looking forward to the next part. Keep up the great work.
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Date: 2011-03-12 06:52 pm (UTC)eeee thank you! :)))))
so glad you liked *beams*
ahhahaha... cub Jared was cuuute, but wolf Jared will be anything but that *grins*
mhm, yes, I'll write it, actually I have already writen that part so... phew :) I'm done with it for the moment :))))))
and you know.. I DID get over the feeling of omg this is weird!
BUT
maybe it was because of the human/human sex, and not animal/human sex, you know!? :)))
so phew, I've writen the part, I'm done with it... for now... because idk how many times the boys will have erm sex :) he :)
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! and I will TRY my best to not disappoint :)
S.
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Date: 2011-03-15 01:23 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-03-15 09:18 am (UTC)awww sowwy... but I'll update today OR tomorrow and the chapter will be Jared's... and then next week the chapter will be Jensen turning 18 :) and then the chapter after that will be the boys meeting... so.. you only have to wait for 2 more chapters :)))))
thank you sooo much for reading and I promise the boys will meet very very soon! :)
S.
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Date: 2011-03-21 08:24 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-03-22 04:06 pm (UTC)yeah his wolf side is really dark... but his man side is really gentle! :)))) and it's that contrast what makes this story sooooo awesome to write :)
thank you so much for reading!
S.