*giggles* hehehe, I totally had to warn about the 'oh God' thingy, because sometimes repetative sentences can be annoying, but here, it just had to be like this :-) Hahaha, so cool ... thats really cool, that the story made you read faster to get to the end and then a twist came that made you slow down - that's a really awesome compliment! :-):-) Lol, poor Jensen, he was all confused and oh God wtf and scared and panicky, but in the end ... all Jared was doing was preparing him to go home :-)
Thank you sososo much for reading, especially now when you have dived into the writing waters yourself and won't have much time to read .. because once you start writing, you can't stop! :-):-):-)
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Date: 2014-01-10 11:27 am (UTC)Hahaha, so cool ... thats really cool, that the story made you read faster to get to the end and then a twist came that made you slow down - that's a really awesome compliment! :-):-)
Lol, poor Jensen, he was all confused and oh God wtf and scared and panicky, but in the end ... all Jared was doing was preparing him to go home :-)
Thank you sososo much for reading, especially now when you have dived into the writing waters yourself and won't have much time to read .. because once you start writing, you can't stop! :-):-):-)
S.