...they didn't watch you turn bluer as the minutes ticked by, didn't watch you choke on your spit, didn't see your veins bulge out all over your body, didn't have to be there to see the terror in your eyes when the water hit you, didn't hear you scream, didn't hear your whimpers and moans and the pleading look in your eyes. The silent scream of help. They weren't scared for you, they weren't panicking over you if you were breathing or not and if your heart was still beating and if your brain wasn't freezing over and one wrong move and it would shatter into a million pieces. So, shut your mouth.
This bit of writng and how you placed it was magnificent!
I love this verse, love how brotherly Dean is with Sam in this!
And I am enjoying how you are slipping the world-building in, little bits of information that are combining to make a very complete universe. Clearly you've put thought into things!
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Date: 2013-11-25 09:52 am (UTC)This bit of writng and how you placed it was magnificent!
I love this verse, love how brotherly Dean is with Sam in this!
And I am enjoying how you are slipping the world-building in, little bits of information that are combining to make a very complete universe. Clearly you've put thought into things!
Please keep going!