I totally love your style of writing....no need to cut back on anything that feels right and is part of your individuality...it defines you. Many writers have a certain way with words that defines their work as much as their character. Knowing how to use it to greatest effect is the key and you definitely have that knack. It is commendable and not something mundane or trifling at all! Keep up the good work!

Have a lovely Easter. Hugs x

PS Is there another a chapter 15 of The Hunt as I was recapping that story last night and couldn't find anything further after 14? As I stated before I was away from lj for over 10 months from beginning of last year and have been on and off since. But now I am more of less back in the swing:). Thanks. x